Feedback from final title sequence : take 2

What words would you use to describe the visual style?

- Blood + gorey with photos - stalkery
- Photos were good but didnt get why he was a hobo
- Very bloody
- Titles a bit tacky
- CCTV effect really good
- location convincing

Highlight at least three things that you think are good about this thriller and two
areas for development or suggestions of how things could have been done differently.

- In time with music good
- CCTV shots good
- Music fitting editing
- Flashing confusing - effective
- I like the font
- Excessive repetition

How effectively edited is this thriller?

- well edited - music fitted with changes of shot transitions
- good titles
- Shots of the wall - going to the struggle on the chair is good, but gets a bit repetitive
- titles with bloodstains are very effective
- final title excellent
- quick cuts between shots at the end created tension and were in time with music
- The photos were excellent

Discuss the use of sound in this thriller, both diegetic and non-diegetic. What emotions does it invoke and how effective is it?

- music is dramatic/sort of mission style
- needed a bit of diegetic sound