Feedback on rough cut

Editing

• Good titles/introduction of characters
• use of transitions flow well- CCTV effective
• Pace a bit slow - content interesting, but faster pace would be benefiting

Camerawork

• CCTV bit is rather good
• the photos are good
• the shots of the room are depressing
• Pretty damn good

Sound

• Chainsaw noise would be good
• or like noises that like relate

Mise-en-scene

• Very hostel and saw like
• a lot of fake blood
• the CCTV footage was good
• nice red tinting
• The chainsaw and axe looked slightly tacky

Narrative

• No clear storyline
• Idea is good but could be expressed more to make more effective
• random footage f car park

Generic convention

• being watched/followed, blood, death, kidnaps, abstract